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Unsuccessful Suicide

Oh blackness, blackness all around me.
Inside of me, drowning me.
The darkness is thick.
Dragging me down like quicksand.
I cannot pull away.

There is no relief in sight.
This is barbaric to keep me chained.
My outcome is bleak.
Is there no knight to save me.

Being buried alive in it grimmest form.
Oh dear God what have I done?
To deserve such as this...
There is no light at the end of the tunnel.

Call me home Dear Lord, call me home.
I cannot bear another day.
These feelings of hopelessness, worthlessness...
Why has my family abandoned me?
Here is this cold stark room.
I do not belong with these others....





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  • totally perfect for the prompt, thank you so much! i justa dored the desperate, hopelessness of this. way amazing. thanks again for entering!!! good luck!