Hot tears roll down cold cheeks
my body quivers with rage unleashed
there's no sound which can escape from my mouth
and my heart is beating wishing for no tomorrows
Time is not my concern
for this is a horrible dream
one I must wake from
or slowly die from within
Disgusted by what has become
overwhelmed with a future unseen
aches and pains are laid before me
I feel so dead but unwilling to leave
If I could walk away
and never be thought of again
I would
but this world does not allow that sort of thing.
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A contest entry
- desperatly depressing by frozenblackpetals.
550 points, ended February 4, 49 entries
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What to do in an insane world?
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i love you peom in some ways i liketo think of it as how people should consider the world and themselves, well yea its very good!
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wowzers, this really spoke to me. way powerful. and so true! thank you so much for entering!!
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I love this. My kind of writing!!
Beautifully written
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Happy 2009!!
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I. like. beautiful. write. want to see more.
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AMAZING!!!
this is a great poem! your really good! Keep up the good writing!!!
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