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~ All Yours! ~

Guests where already mingling under the watchful gaze of Kittens' brown sultry eyes. Greeter for the evening she was in charge of making sure all needs were catered for. Including the introduction of  new slaves, all she was waiting for now, was Honey to show.

Honey called Earl,  handing him a glass of mulled wine, slowly kissing him on his neck, she shivered as she breathed in his musky scent. Smiling she ordered him to run her bath, with a quick,  "Yes, Mistress, thank you, Mistress," he was gone.  A smile spread across her rose pink lips, excitement rushed through her at the thought of what was to come, her stomach was in knots as she thought upon the gift she had got him. It was priceless, a one off, something she knew he had hankered after for such a long time.

Making her way up the stairs the smell of spiced cinnamon scented candles wafted along the passage.  Pausing on the landing she peered out of the window, a light covering of snow had decorated the outside, giving it a picture post card finish. She watched as  the moonlight danced across the grass making it shimmer as though a million stars had fallen, it looked beautiful.

"Mistress, your bath is ready, do you require anything else?"  Her slaves gravelly voice pierced the air shattering the silence, breaking moment. Do I require anything else? she mused, as she made her way to her bedroom..she adored a slave that was always so eager to please,  a wry smile lit her blue eyes making them sparkle like sapphires. As she slipped out of her clothes, she replied,  "Yes, I do. I require you to join me in the bathroom."  Pleased he was making his Mistress happy, he acknowledged the order, with a simple "Yes, Mistress," then turned and made his way back into the en suite bathroom, wrapped in a light sheer fabric gown, Honey followed.

Entering the warm aromatic bathroom, Honey reached for her slave, slowly she stroked his cheek, letting her fingers gently trail down his neck toward his chest. "Are you enjoying that?" she teased. Earl simply nodded, acknowledging with "Yes Mistress," the words sticking in his throat. It had been a while since he had been treated in such a manner, being punished for disobedience, just being in her company felt like Christmas had already arrived. 

Honey decided to test her slave one last time before she stopped punishing him. She wanted to make sure he was going to do as asked, when asked and not embarrass her has he had done a few months before. Looking him up and down, she had to admit he was gorgeous, that aside, she needed to be sure he was still up to being her slave. "Mmm, I need to pee slave." She watched amused, as he squirmed uneasily, without any further prompts he assumed the position, squatting over him Honey let her hot steamy piss gush over his face, his eager mouth sucked and licked her wet hole, drinking from her as though he had been stranded in a dessert for the last few months, not taking his deep brown eyes off his Mistress, eagerly he consumed every last drop of her honeyed nectar.

Pleasure dressed her skin in a soft pink blush, her nipples, rigid, pressed against the softness of the sheer fabric as though they where trying to escape. Earl went to caress her voluptuous breasts, brushing his hands to one side she stood up, watching as her slave composed himself.  Satisfied, she dismissed him, expressing that he had indeed learnt his lesson well and thus far that day had served her well. Giving him instructions that he was to clean up her mess, he was then free to get himself ready and enjoy the party, no other demands would be met on him that night.

The party was in full swing as Honey made her way down to the back room, having a quick word with kitten on the way, she got herself a drink. She stood in the doorway watching as everyone enjoyed themselves. She noticed how well Wayne had settled into his role as her newest recruit, and was impressed to see how well he was following the commands Emma had given him.  His thick black cock, rigid, swollen to capacity thrust deep into her mouth, fucking Wayne's ass at the same time was Earl, holding onto his hips he watched as his cock slid in and out of him, taking smooth strokes his ass tightened with each thrust, his cock slick.

Gagging, Emma, signalled for Wayne to stop, not faltering and pleasing Honey, he did as he was told,  Withdrawing his cock from her mouth, he started to wank for her as Earl continued driving his dick, deep into his ass, fucking him hard.  Their bodies glimmered with sex as sweat ran down their backs. Their bodies bucking against each others, Earl quickened his pace powering into Wayne making his body bow.

Wanking, frenziedly for Emma,  leaning forward she grabbed hold of his balls digging her nails in she squeezed them tight, as he let out a breathless bellow, Emma took his cock, spitting on the tip again and again she worked it into his swollen pulsating length. Both of them started growling deep feral moans, baring down Wayne took Earls full length his balls slamming against his ass.  Their bodies, bucked and contorted succumbing to a dual climax, Wayne and Earl let out bestial roars, as their bodies jerked uncontrollably. Shooting his seed deep into his ass, Wayne bared down riding his large cock taking his cum deep, his ass contracting to his first anal orgasm, at the same time he shot his thick creamy load into Emma's waiting salivating eager mouth. Honey watched as Emma gulped down her reward like her favourite chocolate bar, she didn't miss a bit.

In the background Kitten was now showing off four new slaves, fuck-toys ready for their first outing, after undergoing kittens expert training it was now time for them to put to use what they had learnt.  As Earl plugged Wayne's ass keeping his creamy cum for later that evening, a pretty she-male caught his eye. On all fours he was being led on a leash by kitten, making his move Earl walked over and made his intentions clear. Kitten explained that for the time being under no circumstances was he to walk anywhere...as a punishment all he could do was crawl, doing whatever bidding was desired of him as required to keep the guests happy.

Chatter, laughter, grunts and groans laid heavy in the air, as the smell of sex mingled with the warm scent of cinnamon.

Taking the leash from kitten happy with the new pet he had acquired, he proceeded to one of the unused bedrooms...as he made his way past Honey, he paused...Looking her straight in the eye, he ordered her to follow...Honey thought for a moment. Was this what she wanted? Could she allow herself to give up control? Leaving her no time to answer her own questions he repeated his request, his tone more forceful..."Honey, you're up!" Taking hold of her wrist he led them both to the bedroom.

The door closed with a thud that yelled business. Placed around the room where toys of every conceivable kind, from that of pleasure, to punishment, to torture. Earl walked over  selecting  a set of cuffs he ordered Honey to put them on. Honey let out a stubborn sigh, saw the look on Earls face and proceeded to fulfill his request. Placing her ankles in a spreader bar he secured them to rings on the floor.  Earl, raised her arms above her head, securing them her wrists and arms where soon supporting most of her weight.

Her cunt seeped droplets of excitement, as Earl placed a vibrator deep into her wet  pussy, strapping it in. Honey waited expectantly, for him to turn it on..to give her pleasure.  Happy with how she was, Earl turned his attention to his attractive new pet, not until he had had his fill of the she-male would Honey's training begin. He admired how Honey looked, so beautiful, yet he could see defiance in her deep blue eyes and knew training her to do his bidding would not be an easy task. Asking if she was ok, she nodded. Earl looked up at her, "I said are you ok? I didn't hear your answer Honey."

"I am fine!" she replied defiantly.

"Fine what!?" came Earls terse response. "Say it Honey," he demanded.

" I am fine, Master." That last word sealed her fate she had now handed over control to Earl.  Making his way over to his pet, glancing back, he confirmed what she had said. "I am your Master Honey, don't forget it!"

"Haven't you forgot something?" She enquired.

"What would that be Honey?" He asked amused, knowing the more she asked the longer it would take for him to give her the pleasure she was seeking.

"The vibrator, it is not working."

"Is that so? May I remind you that I am your Master, no more chat." With that he left her, making his way to his new attractive pet.

She listened and watched as her Master fucked and was fucked by his pet. One minute soft and gentle the next raw and wanton, and Honey wanted that. On all fours his pet powered into Earls ass. Aroused, a stream of moisture ran down Honey's wanton thighs, her body started to writhe wanting the freedom to use the vibrator that was filling her cunt. Her arms and shoulders ached from the position she found herself in, she wanted to call to him to demand that he take her, use her, fuck her anything that would dampen the heat of desire she was feeling between her wet thighs.

Bringing his pet off into a glass, dismissing him, he pressed the glass against Honey's lips. He could smell her arousal. How he loved seeing a bitch in heat...especially his bitch. "Drink!" He said firmly. Although protesting in her mind, she did what was asked of her, wanting to please her Master, and the rewards that would follow in doing so, she drank the cum. Acknowledging his kindness she thanked her Master.

His hands roamed over her body, caressing one minute, flicking and slapping the next, soft and gentle in some places, rougher in others.  Stood behind her, caressing her full heaving breasts, his thick stiff cock slid into the crack of her ass. As her training continued, she realised she was enjoying being bound and shackled, and that her pleasure was ultimately in his hands. Earl, let his hands slip between her wet thighs, she let out a deep moan as he teased the moisture from her full cunt. Pushing her hips back she tried to obtain deeper stimulation from his cock. Removing the straps, turning on the vibrator she gasped as he worked her throbbing hole, at the same time sliding his cock in and out of her tight ass, he continued just enough for her to secrete more juices. He decided at that point she was ready to continue onto the next level/phase of training....

Her skin tingled all over in desire as he continued to work her into a higher state of stimulation. Earl continued with extended periods of soft sensual touching, Honey was responding nicely kissing him passionately.  Her breathing rapid, her flesh once again was dressed in the softest hues of intense arousal.  Throughout the night various degrees of pleasure and pain where administered, from excessive whipping as she came, to having a punishment vibrator placed inside her....teaching her to concentrate not on the pain..but the pleasure that was going on at the same time.

As her second phase of training came to an end Earl removed her from her ties, lying in bed with her, he pulled her into him, holding her tight, his arms and legs draped protectively over her.  "Thank you Mistress Honey, for the perfect gift."  Honey kissed him gently, stroking the side of his face she acknowledged is appreciation, with "Merry Christmas Master." A soft smile curved her full pink lips as she fell to sleep within his loving arms. Pulling her closer into him he nestled his head in the crook of her neck, basking in the power of her submission.

Author notes

BG created by my sweet and sensual sis Piffers
Thank you Hon

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  • Sun-shiney
    May 18, 2009

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    its so good.when two are in love its true they should be each others masters. at least thats how me and my love see it


  • Dark Otter
    March 14, 2009

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    Judges critique

    Content 40%-38 points
    A very descriptive, risk taking narrative that left m blsuhing. Sometimes the narrative seems unclear who is doing what to whom. The narrative voice and language seem consistent though sometimes a little on the raw side.

    Poetic Devices 20%-17 points
    Very good use of adjectives and the five senses for the narrative side of the story. Did not seem much use of metaphor and alliteration, assonance and consonance. You chose to simply tell a story

    Form 20%-20 points
    for storytelling it seems fine, you might consider indenting the first line of each paragraph.

    Spelling, grammar, punctuation 10% 10 points
    I looked this over with a 'fine toothed comb', well done! Only problem I had is that an ellipsis (...) is only three dots. You worked this carefully.

    Appearance 10% 9 points
    I love your background and font color. Just wished you had stuck an image in there that matches the side panel and story.

    94 points
    A hot read that is definitely you! Thanks Michelle!


    • onesugar gold member
      March 15, 2009
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      Thanks Greg for your review and the silver...I went through my spelling and punctuation with a fine tooth comb myself They are not my strong point.

      Glad you enjoyed and thank you once again
      Love ~sweetness~

  • Dark Otter
    March 10, 2009
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    This is good, onesugar!

    I look forward to the full critique.

    • onesugar gold member
      March 10, 2009
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      So do I, I think LOL!!!
      Cheers Greg
      Love ~sweetness~


  • sunoir
    March 8, 2009
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    Thats one heck of a present. Erotic Christmas indeed!

    • onesugar gold member
      March 9, 2009
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      Thank you for stopping by to read
      your comment is truly appreciated
      ~sugar~


  • Dark Otter
    January 13, 2009
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    Truly golden!

    You went over the edge with this and I fell down right with you. Your erotica sizzles with fun and passion. Just right for bad boys and girls everywhere!


    • onesugar gold member
      January 13, 2009
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      So glad you enjoyed hon, I appreciate you commenting as always
      Love ~sweetness~ xxx


  • ennovy silver member
    January 4, 2009

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    Darn I wanted to be first to read this story but am glad I get to read it at last.....You have truly created a golden tale of sensuality...so sweetly erotic & sizzling......I love the naughtiness of Master & slave this tale rocks.....You go girl....write on!...Novy

    Best Wishes in 2009
    remember to kick up your


  • Swtpoetryman
    January 4, 2009

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    Wallowing in the power of her submission! YES. INDEED!

    TURNAROUND is fair play - especially as a juicy gift between MISTRESS, pet, & MASTER for a day - on a VERY MERRY & KINKY CHRISTMAS! This is just what this naughty boy was looking for to do THE HANDY SHANDY with on this Holiday Season! Thanks SO MUCH for your submission - and making it just in the nick of time - which is good as GOLD to me - just like your own special brew of British Tea. YUMMY! And now I'm off to complete me judging which is nearly complete!
    Trophies and points should be cumming soon - as I have been and may be doing more of! HE! HE! EMMA said it BEST when she said 'You are so DIRTY!" even after your bath! HE! HE! - And that is HUNKY DORY with a naughty boy like me.
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.

    • onesugar gold member
      January 4, 2009
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      Thank you so much hon for the GOLD! Whoohoo
      Truly appreciated xxx


    • onesugar gold member
      January 4, 2009
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      Yey!, it is so good being dirty, whoohoo...I had plenty of time love.
      So glad you had your hands full as you read this, and it gave you the pleasure you where seeking...What a naugty boy you are
      As always it was a pleasure to be able to take part. Thank you for your wicked comment, always appreciated.
      Love you Chelle xxx

  • twodie4
    January 4, 2009

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    You are so DIRTY! There is nothing else to say except, you and Earl amaze me. I don't know how you can write these lol I have read, commented and now I am scarpering..need to find hubby
    All the best with this kinky hot write
    Emma


    • onesugar gold member
      January 4, 2009
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      LMAO! You make me laugh Emma. I hope ya hubby enjoys what is instore after you read this.
      Always a pleasure to have you read hon. I have a vivid imagination LOL!!!
      ~sugar~

  • ennovy silver member
    January 2, 2009
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    I will be back O-Sugar...

    • onesugar gold member
      January 3, 2009
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      It should be here by the end of the day, cheers Novy
      ~sugar~

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