Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Alone, Broken, and Beautiful

and as he walked away leaving her for the very last time
she watched with her head held high
tears hanging in her eyes as she tried to understand what was happening
and in this confusion
the broken
the hurt
the empty
the lonely
the numb
little girl that she was took hold
and for those few seconds
she looked more beautiful than anything you could comprehend
because the pain she held inside
forced the inner beauty out
and as he turned around for a final look at his creation
he realised at once what he had lost.

Author notes

This is just somthing i was thinking about and i just realised that in every pain there is a misunderstood and amazing beauty.

Hi. comments?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • daviscth silver member
    January 25

    Edit | Reply
    The imagery in your piece is amazing and overflows with emotional undercurrents. I love the title too. I suck at free verse so can't offer any suggestions but I did enjoy this very much.