i. dreaming.
my ribs feel like nails twisting into my bleeding heart. and i swear
there's muddy water flowing through my veins and rough rocks
have replaced my joints, because I feel so lifeless-- yet there's so
much pain. it all must be some kind of crazy dream.
ii. awaking.
my eyes flutter open, like a butterfly escaping its cocoon, so cautious
of what lies ahead. i wasn't expecting to see my bright green, pink
polka-dotted walls but rather a smooth wooden coffin resting deep
below the ground. it all took me by surprise, stealing the air from my
charcoal lungs and i could feel the fire starting to blaze.
wine red acid is burning my throat making it impossible to catch my breath.
gasping. gasping. gasping. my eyes, now the size of the moon glowing
in the midnight sky, rapidly scan my room. there's something crushing
my chest, driving the nails into my heart. my mouth opens to scream
but no words come out. my legs are numb, and my arms feel like they
don't exist. im suffocating in stale air and nobody's there to save me.
'it's just a dream.' my thoughts are pounding in my head like a million
raindrops falling quickly to the cement. the bangs vibrate my ear drums,
ringing my ears. 'it's just a dream.' yet everything feels and looks so real.
my tears are like diamonds as they scrape into my cheeks. ruby red
streams drip down my cheek bones and into the corner of my mouth;
the salty taste of tears and blood combined makes me gag and i'm
fighting to survive, still choking on the wine red acid. i'm trying to find
the strength to breathe, when it all suddenly hits me.
iii. reality.
you walked away from me, turning your back and leaving it all behind.
you completely took every part of me-- leaving me here to die; and
im paralyzed from the inside out.
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this is really good! no joke..like wow...its deep, and the last part helps people understand and relate, bravo, and good luck 
