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children draw perimeter time alone like mother birthing

on empty basketball court


sun was colored in
skillfully



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http://allpoetry.com/contest/2431973
tightly wrapped me even though I couldn't get in,
not cornered from that connotation!

please leave off good luck, unnatural emoticons, applause symbols...hypes

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  • individuality gold member
    April 12
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    on empty basketball court - i think of time here and pace, rhythm, the boucncing ball of time.


    sun was colored in - here i think of chickn chop sticks for some reason, maybe i am just hungry. but i also think of well colours - pencils and paper, artistry, paint by numbers.

    skillfully - well we all like to think we are adept but most of the time we are not