Can you imagine how I feel at this time?
Of anger that gouges my feelings with such intensity
Can you imagine the murderous thoughts that
clammer my mind I can hardly speak of it.
Can you imagine what I could do to you for all the darkest hate I feel?
You take me for a proper fool and treat me with such comtempt.
Can you imagine what I could do to you?
Heart beat racing
palpating
Hatred boiling
Wishing you were dead
Can you imagine the guilt in having all these feelings
Which you have sown in this love lost heart?
I tried to care
I did my best
I gave everything to make your life easier.
You betrayer of dreams
I despise you
I hate you..
May God forgive me for the dreams I have.....
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Such intense emotion. I am so impressed.
I am so sorry that you feel this way. Your anger and pain is so evident.
Thank you for entering my contest -
wow
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Simple but beautiful.
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Wow. Simply stunning piece. A great write packed full of emotion. i really liked this, YB. Thanks so much for the share!
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way powerful
it flowed really nicely, and was really realistic! like, i could feel the hate, and the hate for the hate, and it all just fit together in this beautiful spiral of pain. or.... something... (lol).
thanks for entering!!! good luck!!
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