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Creatures Of The Sea

The heat of our passion are like warm velvety waves
crashing against the shores of our body,
foamy and misty yet salty and sweet
pure evervescene of tantalizing love.
As we lay on the shore
embraced in passion and longing
flesh on flesh vibrating,
stimulating our senses beyond belief.
You taste is like sweet nectar rising from the earth
penetrating my mind, body and soul.
Our bodies rise and fall
as though carried by an invisible wind
beyond the stars,
we float as if on a cloud of silvery lining.
We dance an exotic dance
moving to the sound of moaning waves
until our bodies collide
and we become as one mystical entity.
Beyond the distance our cries of esctasy soar
like birds in flight with their high pitched squeals.
We have become creatures of the sea
tangled in each others lust
we soar back to earth, fulfilled
landing in a sandy mound of earth.
we moan and toss on a glistening shore
our imprints mingled in savory juices
drenched in milky waves
we caress each other, staring into watery eyes
we are covered by a blanket of radiant love.
 

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  • darell
    January 10

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    Hypnotic!

    Mmm! what a wonderful journey
    into love and passion. The images
    are oozing with romance and affection.
    You write with such powerful emotion.
    Taking the reader into a odyssey of
    extreme rapture. Excellent work


  • SilencefillsMySoul
    January 4

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    Ooh, I love beaches and waves! I also love this piece! The use of imagery here is overwhelming, unbelievable. Great job here.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    January 3
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    Wonderfully Written!

    There is so much beauty and imagery
    in this. I love the way that you put this
    together here. I love the passion and
    sensuality and the way that it all played
    out in my mind. Thanks so much for this
    entry and good luck to you here!




    Jeremy0826


  • queenie
    January 3
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    fantastic

    well i see that you have still got it even after not writing for so very long.i got lost in the imagery of this.the lines were subtle yet very vivid.you told a wonderful story of love and lust and it was so very sensuous.you remain my favorite poetic storyteller.


  • wattle silver member
    January 2
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    Creature of the sea indeed. It's a rare treat reading such a masterpiece. The tide has been out too long. I'm hoping this is the first of many. ---- May the new year sweep you upon warm shores where treasure lay waiting for kindness. ------ Thank you.

  • Uglyblackdog
    January 2
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    incredible write!!!

    I love the imagery and the sensual feeling here...excellent job

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