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Fairy Tails Written Head Over Heels

He is my
emerald dragon





in shinning
armor



so
who can save me now?

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So confused.

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  • They Say Shannon
    January 2, 2009
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    This so simple,
    but astounding still.

    I love the "emerald dragon" and "knight" affect because it gives me this bejeweled idea that's so gorgeous,
    and simple,
    yet beautiful and perfect still.

    And the idea of shiny little scales and whatnot.
    I don't know...
    it all just worked.
    Look at me, I'm rambling. Fantastic.
    Anyways,
    loved it, darling, like always. (:


  • TChaplinette
    January 2, 2009
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    <3

    this is great, as always!


  • missygreendaychimp
    January 2, 2009
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  • missygreendaychimp
    January 2, 2009
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    thoughful,
    simple but thought provoking!