Tears sting
as the flow down
ever so slow.
My lips frown
and it stings
a scowl for all to see
my self pity
and hatred for myself.
Anger hidden
in my core,
burning at times
like a raging fire
always smoldering,
keeping ready.
They all think
that I'm a bitch
when really I am.
But if they only knew
that I only wish,
they would leave me alone
and let me watch them,
watch him.
I know I can't have him
he is so far away
I love him,
and say it everyday.
But until the moon crashes
and the world ends,
we will never be alone.
Not until the very end.
When time stands
all but still.
A contest entry
- Addicted to Pain by xXCadyBabbiXx.
900 points, ended January 3, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hhahaa. funny shit. i miss our combersations in the comment section
funny how different i am.. and how very much the same. i doubt you could write me up that perfect now..
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Great
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Oh yeah, you definetely are describing Cady. Great job!
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Thanks, I don't see a flood of comments, thank god.
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Just wait. We're doing Copper beauty first then this one shall be next! x33
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Uh oh...
Sounds like some people have nothing better to do -
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Yeup. This is better than just staring at a screen waiting for something interesting to happen.
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I'm heyahhhh!
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I love how the two of you have conversations in the comment section.... haha. Very nice Kyler. Describes little miss Cady baby perfectly. haha
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Ah, Theo...
We do it cause were cool like it x]
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EEK!
This is quite perfect.
Honestly, this is great.
As if, I cant tell who wrote this from the background, and the title, and the last four lines x]
Anyways, this is very good.
I love it.
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There.
I tried to capture what you were thinking..
I know I may not have done to well. -
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Kind of.
There are points where it did it perfect, and points where you didnt.
But you got the main idea of it.
Very Close.
Most people who entered had no idea. -
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Maybe now I've hit it a little closer?
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And I love how the background liner is purple <33 -
The anger think helped it much :]
Your wonderful, and you continue to amaze me.. -
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I knew I'd forgotten the anger part, so I re read it and realized it needed to be in there. -
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Yes, because I think that is my most dominant emotion.
Of course, without my anger, I do not think I would be me.
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I think your right Babe..
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I know :]
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