seafoam sparkles joy
in ocean's wild blue madness
gulls' wings beat music
Author notes
Haiku from Fantasy Dream
A contest entry
- Ocean Haiku poems for Chocolate-eating Peg-leg Pirate Group by Blossom Fairy.
750 points, ended January 6, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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it sounded like the ocean to me great job!!
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
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Ye been bein' at the ocean more than one time, I can tell, good Fantasy. I am cast right up on the beach from readin' this here poem of yours.
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A real beauty, Fantasy... a haiku that makes me feel so glad to think of the ocean in this way.
Happiness is haiku! 
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I will tell you, as a general rule, ogre that I am, I don't care for haiku, however this haiku is beautiful and so very lovely!
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rich
A lot packed into a few words. It makes you fell like you are there.
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