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When it Rains

((read notes first))

(acoustic guitar intro)

Isn't it wonderful,
the way your so beautiful?
I just don't understand,
how things got so out of hand.

And I can't believe
it's really time to go..

No I can't believe
it's really time to go....

(drums and bass enter)

It's a funny thing,
remembering,
the way things used to be.

We had all the time in the world,
there was nothing else,
just you and me.

And I can't believe
it's really time to go..

No I can't believe it's really time to,
go....

(drums fade out the back in)

because I know,

Yes I know...

(chorus)
That every step I take
and moment I fake
to be all right without you
will just be a lie

And ever time it rains
I see your face
just like I used to dream at night

(drums exit)
I need a helping hand....

I can't do this on my own....

So oh God someone help me..    ((drums build))
To find out where
my path lies....

(drum solo)

(chorus)
And every step I take
and moment I fake
to be all right without you
will just be a lie

And ever time it rains
I see your face
just like I used to dream at night.


(chorus)
And every step I take
and moment I fake
to be all right without you
will just be a lie

And ever time it rains
I see your face
just like I used to dream at night...
(guitar solo)


(build)
Just give us one more chance,
spare a second glance,
let's give it one more shot,
and show 'em what we've got.

(chorus)
Cause every step I take
and moment I fake
to be all right without you
will just be a lie

And ever time it rains
I see your face
just like I used to dream at night...

(just acoustic)

(chorus)
And every step I take
and moment I fake
to be all right without you
will just be a lie

And ever time it rains
I see your face
just like I used to dream at night.... (fade)

And ever time it rains
I see your face
just like I used to dream at night....

Author notes

ok, so this morning I woke up with this tune in my head and almost half the lyrics too. I don't know where it came from

I'm not sure how much is just me writing lyrics to fill space and how much really applies to my life. *shrugs*

Hope you enjoy it.

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Comments

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  • Nyx Moon
    April 21
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    I like it, sounds cool to me.


  • Snaps
    February 13

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    "Every time" would be a good title...
    And Jordan, this is amazing. Truly beautiful. Great write, my friend

  • Dark Edge
    January 7

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    How about 'Every Time it Rains' for the memories that the person holds and remembers in the rain?
    Something with 'Rain' though.


  • And Hyetal
    January 5
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    sorry


  • Audric Beaumont
    January 3
    Edit | Reply
    Love it! Got an idea for a title: Only heartbreak without you.


  • baconlicious112
    January 2

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    Oh wow, this is beautiful. I would totally love to hear this being played. I really like how it all flows together perfectly. Good one. :]

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