Goldenrods and roses,
angelic white dress,
vows of forever,
before God and guests.
Stellar constellations,
castles in the sky
time takes wings...
starts to fly.
Shattered glass,
broken dreams,
life coming apart at
the seams...
Icy cold,
becomes your breath,
and so we face our
inevitable death...
With heart full of
hope and love
I pray for peace,
from heaven above...
Author notes
islekine...that's me! kinda tacky...I know...but it was your word bank! lol
I would like to be your spirit guide angel...
hey why not? I want to earn my wings!!! 
Word Bank: (Use at least 5)
(you may use different tenses/constructions of the words)
Angelic hope heart love roses broken ice castle
wings fly goldenrod white death glass stellar constellation
A contest entry
- AP Family~ (Contest) by ZachP.
400 points, ended January 31, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I can't see anything wrong with this... just good poetry, very sad poetry. Thanx for the read. WASP.
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The rhyme here was spot on. A well written work that I'm sure will place high in the finalists list.
Nice write.
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We definately need that peace
Thank you for your beautiful entry, and welcome to the contest
As an interesting note, I truly do belive in my Spirit Guide Angel, who watches over me. Her name is Rachel And I'm sure she'd be glad to have your assistance I'm a troublesome one
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This is really lovely!! Great job!!
(I'd like a spirit guide angel..
)
I really like the depth and message in this.
best wishes in your contest
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