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Star Collector

She's a star collector -
gathering up dreams,
putting moonbeams
in a jar...

She's a star collector,
dancing with the fireflies,
magic twinkling in her eyes -
she lives the moment.

She's a star collector,
she wants to be
a friend with me.

She lives in aimless fantasy,
but still in hope-filled reality,
she dreams of me,
and what life means.

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  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    February 13
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    Oh this is joyous poetry indeed.

    Congrats on the silver.

    mj.


  • Myjoy gold member
    February 5

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    This is lovely, and in a sum says a lot about me as well. Thank you for the entry. Happy Birthday to you as well.


  • Daisy Ballerina
    January 6

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    Beautiful...
    This reminds me of a poem about a collector.... But he collects sounds....
    Thank you for kindly entering my contest!!!!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 5
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    Wonderful write here

    Very sweet indeed and yes we could all be such dreamers if we so tried


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    January 5

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    This is beautiful and so very real of the type of person that I am. You seemed to capture me effortless in all entirety to fly amongst the stars.

    I don't know you or what you wish to be, so perhaps a hint?

    Shari


  • trekkergirl
    January 3

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    No I think that anything YOU want to be you are more than capable of being. This star collector is interesting but then you are more interesting. Very good write. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into our friends reading list.


  • ChelseySmile
    January 2
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    This piece is beautiful and full of magic and wonder.


  • Silent Wayfarer
    January 2

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    This is interesting! It's very different from anything else I've read here so far. Great job! I liked reading it. Very good

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