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Gary, Gary ,Gary

Gary, Gary, Gary.
You helped me threw all my troubles,
and still are.
I dont care that you live in Indiana,
just that no matter how far away,
we can connect here and talk about our problems.
I think that is what drew me to this 17 year old person
who has helped me threw my lost loves.

He says he will be there for me whenever I need him.

And guess what?

I do indeed belive him.

Thank you for all your help .

I do hope we meet someday..

You truly meen so much to me.

I probly would not be abel to think if it were not for him.

Because to him i can clear my head.

Gary, Gary, Gary.

Author notes

you know who you are as long as you know your name lol!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Mr.
    June 29
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    This is really touching. Good work.

  • twodie4
    January 16

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    Apart from one or two typo's this had lovely sentiments, and you can feel how important Gary is to you. Thank you for your entry
    All the best
    Emma


  • xxgivin-upxx
    January 3
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    awwww

    thanks, i didn't reliz i ment so much to you,

  • imahealer
    January 2
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    I read you are going to revise this poem,. I do hope you go back and use spell check. This verse sounds more like prose. I can tell that this person means a lot to you. Always nice to know there is kindness on this site. PLease rem ember to use a bit more imagery and maybe a couple of metaphors, or similies. This will greatly change this into a poem. Very best wishes.

    Linda

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