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My usual walk.

Sitting in the clearing of the woods,
listening to birds chirp and tweet,
the smell of damp tree bark creeping up my nose
while trying to find myself a dry seat.

A little rabbit hops past,
finding it's way home,
it hops quite fast
on it's little fluffy legs.

The sounds of animals,
scarpering around,
through leaves and twigs,
many legs abound.

My usual day walk
always gives me a great feeling,
to go and enjoy nature,
the trees and animals are always appealing.

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  • The.poet.of.hearts
    March 5

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    humz, it's better to come on nature side, instead of crying every day
    im happy with this change
    keep writing

    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • serenity silvermoon
    January 9

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    i think this was a wonderful poem i wish you would have one this poem is a winner in my eyes you and i have alot in common we both love animals and we have alot of other things in common


  • Kathraina silver member
    January 4

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    Bravo! Wonderful job on this piece. The flow and rhyme is superb, and I love the imagery and simplicity! Fantastic job! Good luck!

    ♥ Kathraina


  • She burns
    January 2

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    The beauty of everything here seen in your eyes!!! Such words from your heart, very heartfelt, beautiful and true, the life that breathes around us...


    The rabbit,
    Antonio


  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 2

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    Wonderful write here

    Oh one is never alone if you stay aware of the life about us for you see like with humanity should you lose a finger or limb there is an ora that remains it cant be seen with the naked eye but the person can still feel sensations in that missing part even though its not there .And did you know that plants birds and bugs have this same orra all living things has it . Such wonders in our world a playground our very own we can make it more beautiful in all we do but we mustnt ever overlook it or give care where care is needed


  • Puppydog gold member
    January 2

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    A MORE BEAUTIFUL DAY ONE CAN NEVER HAVE!!!!!

    This sounds like a walk in which I could lose myself, I just love nature, the animals, the streams, trees and just everything! 's

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