Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

secrets

sunlight never knocked this door
season abhor it's sight
a place where love took it's last breath
graves, of the lost love
secrets of the dark, come to life!

A contest entry

Tell me what you think.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Hikari Lady
    January 2

    Edit | Reply
    Nice imagery, I enjoyed reading this so much. Your words and flow was so well penned. Really, so expressive 5 lines.

    Thanks for entering and good luck.
    ~Noor


  • Unsigned gold member
    January 2
    Edit | Reply
    Very nice

    Dark and then not

    Good luck

    Simon