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Trees.

Missing image

Dying trees sing songs of wood on flesh
as lost footsteps echo in gnarled roots.
Twisted limbs writhe in a rotting ecstasy
as they feed deeply
on screams.

           
             

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Picture Prompt.

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  • Faded Existence
    January 2

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    Really liked this... beautiful! I can never find words to express how much I like your poetry... wish I could

    -Faded


  • masterblaster gold member
    January 2
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    Hi, nice one, congratulations on your shiny trophy, hsppy new year, regards, Di


  • Hikari Lady
    January 2

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    So dark, makes the picture look even more gloomy. Liked your last two lines as they just declaired the darkness of the write.

    thanks for entering and good luck.
    ~Noor


  • Unsigned gold member
    January 2
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    Nice...really liked this

    Good luck


    Simon


  • Angelflower
    January 2

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    icky, that's a bit freaky..lol. which was the whole point! but still! that ending just gave me the shivers! a wonderful write! best of luck in the contest!!!

    Angel

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