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I'm Yours

I want you to ruin me
I want you to tempt me
Touch me
Kiss me
Like never before
Take everything you want from me
And leave me wanting more

I want you to take me
To a place far away
Secluded
Just the two of us
To keep me forever
Day after day
I'm yours



Author notes

My prompt was "I Want You To Ruin Me"

Freeverse

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  • StarEyes
    January 6

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    There is something in this one, that leaves one dreaming of a couple of star-crazed lovers on a romantic weekend get away. What a great job on this one!

    Best of luck in this contest!