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Bent



Twisted limbs of ironwood,
misty thaw of permafrost,
line my wandering trail,
knurls of thoughts unbroken,
a bent mind, fragile and frail.






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  • Hikari Lady
    January 2

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    Loved how dark it is and I like your imagery, it was a powerful write indeed. Your begining is my favorite. Nice flowing 5 lines.

    thanks for entering and good luck.
    ~Noor


  • Unsigned gold member
    January 2
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    Very nice Karl..

    Really enjoyed this

    Good luck my friend



    Simon