they go starving, swooned;
lost chlorophyll,
shedding leaves to survive on bones;
sucking bare minimum
whispering plight in hushed tones.
A contest entry
- Morning Dark Quickie!!! =D by Hikari Lady.
400 points, ended January 2, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow this brilliant dad congratulations on your shiny
maralisa
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Oh My~
This tugs at the Heartstrings and the imagery is Excellent
Love the way You penned this also in Brevity
Bravo
Powerful Voice my Friend!
also Happy New Year to You
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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This is a really beautiful and well penned piece. I loved the imagery, tone and emotional color used. A most enjoyable read. Congrats on your well deserved trophy!
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Nice job. I knew you would place with this one. An interesting perspective on the death of trees.
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thank you friend
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Goodness!! This was so dark and tempting. I loved how it just visuallized the picture and I love the imagery. Perfect.
Thanks for entering and good luck.
~Noor -
Love this...the view of the dying trees..so so sad
Well done
Good luck
Simon
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oh this is so eerie and chilling,
i love it.
the idea of trees "wishpering to each other in hushed tones" sends a shiver down my spine. you hold excellent imagery throughout and leave the reader in awe.
and i'm quite impressed with myself for knowing what chlorophyll is! Science can come in handy sometimes!
best of luck in the contest!!
ElectricBloom
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