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Imprisoned

Twisted paths of torment
imprisoning ones soul,
Whispers of light echo,
calling to spirits lost.
Dead before deaths bidding.

A contest entry

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  • Hikari Lady
    January 2

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    Liked the imagery and your words, very close style to what I was looking for and the dark feeling in it consumed me, now that was a great take on the prompt.

    Thanks for entering and good luck.
    ~Noor


  • Unsigned gold member
    January 2
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    Nice and dark..

    Well done

    And good luck to you


    Simon

  • ElectricBloom
    January 2

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    Wow, this is excellent.
    So dark and morbid, yet such beautiful imagery.
    You really capture the reader with this, and I love the title. So powerful!

    Best of luck in the contest.

    ElectricBloom