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Empty Shells

The giving of empty shells
So beautiful, so polished, I'm astonished
Taken away by the appeal, the feel
I thought they were real
Sparkling, dazzling, captivated by the shine
I thought everything was going just fine
Slowly
Crackling, fading, peeling away
Glimpses of the truth
No love keeping it whole
No cornerstone, no heart shown
Bridle, breaking, all of it a side show, faking
And I broken, like empty shells

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  • Nothing worse than thinking we are getting real pearls and finding out it's just faux-pearls. Yes, the cheap baubles will crack and chip, lets hope you find the real.


  • Howard F Kelly
    January 17
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    Mea culpa

    My life you know so well, are you Godess

  • Levity
    January 7
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    Awesome

    As usual.