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Formation Flying

Two pairs
of large black swans,
take off from the river
and circle back to a graceful
splash-down.

Author notes

A Crapsey form of cinquain 2-4-6-8-2

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  • Overcast
    January 2
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    Brilliant imagery, very well written!
    Thanks for entering and good luck to you!


    • Shenton silver member
      January 6
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      Overcast

      Thankyou for your comments which are very much appreciated.
      Best wishes for the New Year.

      Shenton