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to protect humanity-----------

Is He voiceless or with a stone heart?
Why He pretends blind-
When blood shed rules the roost?
Let us wake Him up and raise Him to our expectations
only to protect  the humanity from any untoward ghastly incidents!!!

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  • Overcast
    January 2
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    Hmm..interesting.
    Good luck to you.Thanks for entering!