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One Last Late Night Trip

One late last night trip into the night.
The sun and rain  did unite and left.
Here on the evening shore
I glide across for one last score.

The wind now a gentle breeze.
Thanks to the sun leaving with the cold rain.
Sleep will came with ease.
Till the light of morning again comes.

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m.cheadle-mac

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  • aboomer silver member
    January 10, 2009
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    Lovely feeling of peace in this. I enjoyed it.

    thank you for your entry
    best wishes


  • Sandygram silver member
    January 2, 2009

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    Beautiful Poem

    What a beautiful take on the picture. Your imagery is so very soft and serene. Always a pleasure to read your poetry, Sandy


  • Katie Lazette
    January 2, 2009

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    How wonderful to be able to be upon a lake and sleep to the slow movement of the boat. Nice poem mac.