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Quark Remedy


I considered my smallness as small
But apparently not so at all
There are smaller bits around about
So small they give no kind of shout

They are. scientists suggest, bits of quants.
I would not like to say that to my aunts,
Whose knowledge of physics comes down
To buying "quark" med'cines in town.

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  • piccola
    February 27, 2009
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    I just watched a special about quarks ... the scientist took a hammer to something and showed how the larger pieces landed near the main object and the smaller flew out far away and the smaller they were the farther they were until finally they seemed to disappear although really there ... hmmm. Like me ... rarely noticed although there.


  • Clovis6790Curious silver member
    January 22, 2009

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    Superb

    Oh, I just love your sense of humor in this write. I chuckled, I really did. You might like some of my writes. Here's one called: "Reality", I hope you like it - http://allpoetry.com/poem/3545810

    http://allpoetry.com/item/search?user=Striders+Bar+--&q=Reality&sa=Go


  • islekine
    January 13, 2009
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    This is really a cute take!

    Thanks so much for entering.
    Best wishes in the contest, and always!
    Write on.