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Deep scars

Deep scars
Created from hurt pride. . .
Keep us chained within prisons of fear
until
We break the chains by forgiving.

dragonheart1

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prompt; less words, more action
It is hard to forgive when we are not at fault but it eases the suffering of our pain.

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  • GoodbyeFarewell
    January 3

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    great

    love it so true i am there i feel this piece from my head to my feet great job i love this so much i love the emotion i love the whole thing nothing to complain about keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day


  • maralisa silver member
    January 2
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    a nice poem good luck inthe contestmaralisa


  • Overcast
    January 2

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    A too-common theme I'm not overly fond of but an interesting write, nevertheless.
    Thanks for entering!