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The Fool

Idiotic Fool
Longing for love
Throwing it away
Spending it stupidly
"Make it last forever"
Or so she thought
She gets him back
Then gives it away
Like a piece of trash

Doesn't need it

Only wants..

Her heart full of greed

How can she stand,

the pain of his broken heart?

Standing there stupidly

Like she always does

Doesn't even care

Can't see who she hurts

Stands and watches

His streaming tears.... 

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  • StillLovingYou
    January 2

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    *clapping*

    great write. i loved the way you used the words it has feeling you are write
    oncve again great write