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Broken Hearts

The killer feeling deep in your chest
Reminding you of the love that once stood there
The pain grows each time you remember

 

Those tiny memories that hurt so much

But you love to remember

The scent with each embrace

Soft velvet lips with each and every kiss

Such warm memories.....

That break your heart

 

Tears spill out

You try to forget

Give it time to heal

But time can't heal everything

A broken heart can never be fixed..... 

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This is a poem I put together after having love problems. Enjoy.

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