haiku
this little blue
eyeball will soon
seize Sun
Author notes
Please meet GG -- GoldieGoud -- a New Year's Baby. It was born a few minutes ago! I am so excited. It is the chicky child of rooster GoudjieGoud and mother hen GoldieGold. Both parents are well and alive ... the maternity nurse, shaky 
Prompt: 9 words -- blue ball
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How wonderful and sweet...A wonderful start of the New Yaer and a beautiful tribute to a new member of the family...creative and brillant!
Best to all of you!
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Having seen the proud papa, I had to see the offspring. Stay strong maternity nurse. Your yard seems to be full of chickens -- and if papa is any indication, this one will be beautiful as well.
Great poetry, beautiful birds. What a refreshing treat!
Garrison
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wonderfully creative... x
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some caution over the crayon etcetera per se
nice transition for me to personally not just know photosynethesis in healthy life this afternoon too
oh this reminds me of how many creatures come into being blind at birth, or relatively. and harsh light isn't welcome but when adjusted they are romping in the rays that correlate for different times on irridescent vision of freshness....
yes, quite often blue eyes are evident when born -- when most alkaline among change factor, which some have seen turn color later again returning to such conditions
I like the fun of retinal readiness by "seize Sun" in your piece,
called Carolyn
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Since I talked last with you carolyn, my eyes changed from brown to green...
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parenchma, a film to notice
positive isn't pathetic, may we know changes to that dependency
there isn't daring but during to be charmingly annotated with tendency still to life, so specifically for us more important than no red feet ennerved across iris acridly for road (gift) possibly but red ears per se {wrapping} ~
may you spring by more than contact on face by physique --
called Carolyn
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Beautiful to honor this little chick of God's creation.
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