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Ahmedabad's Shining Morn

 

 

 

 

 

Planets align

within chasms of truth,

as morning meanders

Ahmedabad's miles

and smiles of dawning

dare to dream

 

of sunrise sights

and beauty's bow.

 

And pigeons prance

to tiny crumb

with makeshift's moving sigh,

as limbs

and life

climb clouds...to know

such serenity inside.

 

Calmness captures

simplicity's frames,

whilst day time games

pursue pure love,

to dream

in rush-hour's languid scenes

that hush

as time walks on

 

'top tree

and sky

in greenery's glance,

from glare

of golden pride...

 

unhidden hopes

caress care's clutch,

as inner wealth

enriches souls.

 

For there amongst

those people many

a steeple shouts success,

as son of warmth

and love

and heart

sings Ahmedabad's shining air.

 

And so I say

to music's muse

as peace embraces all

 

I touch the face

of fortune's bliss

my son,

my Vic...

 

come home.

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

eternalpoet - Vic...this is for you son You became my AP son nearly 5 years ago and you & I formed a very special bond. I grew to know not only you, but your family too and often ask of their welfare. We scrapped the whole "AP mum" title many moons ago now...you are my son, regardless of AP and I love you very much. I'm very proud of you for working as hard as you have towards achieving your dreams...Vichitra Joshi is a name many will know and respect...far more than here, that's for sure.

I wrote this poem for the first video you made and shared with me - http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=XviZmJTP_d8

You've been asking me to write for it for so very long...and at last, I have - I hope I've managed to portray the emotion you so easily captured.

I love you son...now and always.

Momma


http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=VukL-D8HFYA&feature=channel_page another treasure

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  • Tinka
    January 8

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    Laura, your poem is Vic's video transformed into words, I couldn't imagine it to be any better. It creates images in my heart and mind that touch with such a warmth I can not describe. And even though Vic is such a hyper hyper jolly person, both your poem and his video remind me of him so much. It's the openness, truthfulness, calmness and peace of mind, warmth of love and purity that reflect his presence I love it so much. Thank you for writing and sharing it, reading your poem makes me feel so warm and happy :- )

  • SoulWhispher
    January 5

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    Wow, this is a fantastic poem, that really is a most enjoyable write, I always love the your work, Love and blessings John


  • ZachP silver member
    January 4

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    Oh, Ms. Laura, this is so sweet and touching. Despite what many people say, it is sooooo possible to make meaningful relationships through websites like this.

    This is a beautiful poem, full of the stellar imagery and wordsmithing that one comes to expect under the banner of "Laura Lamarca".

    Blessed be,
    Zach


  • Hetha gold member
    January 3

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    Aww...this was so heartfelt and moving I especially like this nice little bit:
    "Calmness captures
    simplicity's frames,
    whilst day time games
    pursue pure love,
    to dream
    in rush-hour's languid scenes
    that hush
    as time walks on"

    Beautiful.

  • Awww that was cute.

    haha, but really, this was a great poem with some lovely images.

    "And pigeons prance
    to tiny crumb
    with makeshift's moving sigh,
    as limbs
    and life
    climb clouds...to know
    such serenity inside."

    Beautiful in image and sound.

  • Perfect in every way. He HAS to obey us now. LOL

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