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Death



Drip. Drip. Drip.





So many tubes,  So many wires


Her life skated on thin cracking ice


But her weakness was so strong it strangled her.


Gasping for breath…Breathe…breathe.

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  • Overcast
    January 2
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    Again, not exactly my favourite genre.Thanks for entering and good luck!
    Good job!