Like the first snow flake caught on the tongue,
Or the first warm summer breeze.
Like the spring scent in the air,
Or autumns’ coloured leaves.
You are a wonder to me.
A contest entry
- Less words, more action! by Overcast.
610 points, ended January 6, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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you write with an ease that allows the reader to grasp instanly grasp what you are saying. I love the exquiste wording such as 'like the spring scent in the air' you use all the senses to stimulate the reader. simple yet elegnat! Thankyou for sahring and good luck in the contest
Love and light
RareFlower
ps-thankyuo for commenting on my Poem ' One day.!
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It's so simplistic but it speaks from the heart. It sums up everything one thinks about someone they adore. Definitely a great write
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i meant to applaud it...
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Very Cute
Great images!
I especially like the effect of the last line. It made me realize how wondrous that things as simple as these in nature really are.
Best of luck in the contest! -
Nice imagery there!
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