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Lingering Encounters

Season's
linger encounters
flawlessly timed

where expressions
texture their passage
through transitions

unblemished
complete
unqualified

as Treasures that exalt,
purify, and serve the soul
in timely awakening.



Author notes

3. John Keats- To Autumn
Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    January 16

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    I love expressions texturing passages. So pleased to see an award on this gem. Loved the inspriation from the Keats quote - one of my favs.

    Your poem is filled with expression, spirit and strong faith, yet genlty caresses the seasons and their timely changes with the utmost care and respect.

    Lovely work in this. Much more than most will grasp on a first read. - ahhh timeley awakening. YES!

    A pleasure to read such a beautiful poem this morning. Thank you. ~Pamela


    • FransB gold member
      January 16
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      Dear Pam

      It was lovely to receive your attention and path-guiding comments. Thank you for always stopping over. Blessings to you. Frans


  • Sandygram
    January 5

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    You have penned a wonderful poem for the John Keats quote. Lovely imagery and form. You do capture the splendor of nature in its changing seasons. A pleasure to read. Thank you for entering our contest. Best of luck. Take care, Sandy


    • FransB gold member
      January 16
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      Dear Sandy

      I enjoyed this competition. I try to write to bless rather than win. Thanks for the opportunity. Frans

  • chiefmac
    January 4

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    Lovely take on the prompt. The shape complements and fits the target mood of the poem. The reader left with the understanding of autumn as time unfolds the fall treasures. Thanks for entering our contest and good luc


    • FransB gold member
      January 16
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      chiefmac

      Wonderful contest. Thank you for your comments. Blessings to you. Frans


  • Gwenevere
    January 3
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    Where would we be without the seasons.they are each a treasure to behold as is your poem, Ros


    • FransB gold member
      January 16
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      Gwenevere

      True - the seasons hold many lessons. Thanks for your comment. Frans


  • Denerica
    January 2

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    One of my favorites...Keats. I believe this is the season, renewal, restoration, and recovery. Loved how you captured that. Blessings in 2009

    • FransB gold member
      January 16
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      Denerica

      It seems that Keats is a favourite to all of us. Thanks for the blessings - it is returned with much blessings too. Also, thanks for your kind comment. Frans


  • myrataal silver member
    January 2

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    Ah. Poet!

    I love Keats! I love his work; I love you and I love YOUR work. I love God, and I love His Nature. So: with all of this Love opening my eyes to the beautiful promises of seasonal rejuvenating, I can but marvel at your poem. So very well done!

    All the best in this contest, Friend.

    Love
    Myra


    • FransB gold member
      January 16
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      Myra

      Thanks for the fine and uplifting comments. Blessings to you. Frans

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