Watching as you work
Sweat and rippling shoulders
Tensing, contracting, teasing me
Cat and mouse we play
Meeting my eyes you hold me, caught
Skin, fire, passion; flash before me
Pulse quickens, mouth dries
You break away, leaving me longing
Taunting with desires
Teasing without touch
Longing for satisfaction
You bury me with lust
Each new day we play
You hold me with your power
Eyes sparkling with knowledge
I am your captive, waiting, wanting
A casual graze of fingers
Instant heat consumes me
Throbbing, aching, begging for more
Knowing smile touches lips I long to feel
The simplest caress
I’m melting to the ground
Touch that leaves me quaking
No relief to be found
Taunting me thus for days
Knowing I’m aching, begging you with my eyes
Stringing me along; wet, throbbing, needing more
Caught in your trap, until finally succumbing
Holding back no more you take me
Wantonly devouring me; eyes, hands, mouth
Consuming my body, devouring my soul
Chaining my will, quenching desire, skillfully mastered…
The chase.
Author notes
Dedicated to my husband, John.... How he caught me... 
A contest entry
- Sensual/Erotic Contest For The New Year! by Jeremy0826.
1800 points, ended January 16, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest.. you wont hurt my feelings...
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Wow. This is very... wow I'm speechless
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Because it speaks of real events and not merely from abstract imagination of general human experience, I feel a little voyeuristic as I read this. It is a very sensual poem from a point of view which I can never fully appreciate but may only observe.
I like the way the poem develops. It observes and reacts from a distance ever more narrow until sensation and reaction are synchronous, as immediate to one's person as the blood, moisture, flesh and sinews of her body.
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Excellent!
I can remember being chased like this once, playing the cat and mouse game. This was so very good with great detail, passion and class. You hold the reader spellbound waiting to see what will happen once the chase ends and the devouring begins. Fantastic and my best to you in the contest.
Avril
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this is a tale of lustful teasing and you have told the story in a very classy, yet erotic way. you told well the height of the desires and then brought everything to a passionate conclusion. this piece shows the game of lust play so very well. my best to you in the contest.
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Woo Hoo!
This is Awesome! Wow... gets dreamy lol
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What a beautiful story! Thank you for sharing this write with us, best wishes in the contest!
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Very sensual and beautifully written!
I love the storyline in this. Well done and
thanks so much for taking the time to enter
this contest. Good luck to you here!
Jeremy0826
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