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how beyond u can dream.....

if u manage to cover the distance
you'll manage to have faith
and when u dream with open eyes
you'll find no difference in how beyond u can dream.....

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  • Overcast
    January 2
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    Isn't 'how beyond you can dream' ungrammatical?
    Anyway, good job and thanks for entering!

  • NothingButShrooms
    January 2
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    in how beyond you can dream.

    wow.
    that...breathes of eternity...
    or something.