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Tears In The Night

The tragedies of life
Have no beginning or end
Just sorrowfulness and pain
That will only come again
With the coming of the night

A contest entry

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  • Overcast
    January 2
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    Tragedies have not 'has'..
    Apart form that, good job & thanks for entering.


    • smonte19124 gold member
      January 2
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      Thanks for the critique and the comment it is much appreciated. God Bless, Jo-Ann

  • goalsv
    January 2
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    Perfect discription of the feeling of sorrow.


    • smonte19124 gold member
      January 2
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      Thank you my friend every now and again that ole sorrow tries to sneak on in. LOL God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • Ademon
    January 2

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    Sorrowfulness sucks...I hope that with the light of day it will take that pain away!! If not, just remember what our Granpa's always said to us! Good Luck in the contest dear!!!


    • smonte19124 gold member
      January 2
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      LOL Thank you my friend you made me laugh inspite of not wanting to. And a smile too(smile). God Bless, Jo-Ann

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