Would the rose seem so fair if compared to a rose
in a garden of weeds as in beauty it grows.
Shall a thorn be a kiss or it’s scent be a sigh
as in winter it dies and whispers goodbye.
Author notes
I'm limiting you to five lines at most.
A contest entry
- Less words, more action! by Overcast.
610 points, ended January 6, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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" Shall a thorn be a kiss or it’s scent be a sigh
as in winter it dies and whispers goodbye. "
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How very beautiful! Another sigh from your words.
Best wishes ion the contest.
Gaylene
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Very nice!!!!! Good rhyme. I like it. I like it alot
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You've always been really good at saying so much, with so few... good Luck!
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bravo! a truly moving write! had such a soft feel to it.. You know how to say much with little words.. Bravo! best of luck in the contest!
Angel
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