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I dont want a heart of Stone

All alone
at a crossroads
no one to call my own
so please lord send me someone
before my heart turns to stone

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  • thechairman
    January 2
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    Enjoyed this one Leeshalou (Stand by for a Private Message) "JDG"


  • Overcast
    January 2

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    Ifind the theme a bit common-place.Otherwise, correct.
    Lovely choice of image!
    Thanks for entering


  • thesefadingstars.
    January 2
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    i know how that feels. nice poem.