moving friction less,
without hissing and sighing.
carry water every where
drizzling through skies
evaporating from earth.
Author notes
Less words, more action!
A contest entry
- Less words, more action! by Overcast.
610 points, ended January 6, 23 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a wonderful poem dad good luck inthe contest
maralisa
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Wow~
Oh My now that is quite the Creative picture and Your words brought much to the table
Excellent~ Love the words:
drizzling through skies
Woot
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Very nicely penned!
I would've preferred some other title, though.. -
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changed the title, hope you like it
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Yes, I do like it better
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