The sea of darkness
grey skies over head
they are now behind us
Looking forward, my future
our future together
a bright new beginning
Life's lessons taught well
we have learned, n'over came
What a promising future in store
happiness will reign...
Author notes
Option #3 he he he 
lack of sleep equals giddyness...go figure.
A contest entry
- Quickie by Angelflower.
700 points, ended January 2, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What is one thing that stood out in this poem?
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EVERY MOMENT WE OUR BLESSED WITH POSSIBILITIES, OURS FOR THE TAKING
tHE NEW YEARS SYMBOLIZES THE END AND THE BEGINNING IN A BIGGER PICTURE
BEAUTIFUL WRITE AND A BRIGHT LOOK INTO WHAT WE ARE ABLE TO OPTAIN WHEN WE BELIEVE
OF COURSE AS USUAL WELL WRITTEN
GOD BLESS YOU MY FRIEND...
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...and i do hope your future will be all you wish for my friend, a simple write that says what needs to be said. Well done and all the best
Ken
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What a beautiful wish for future days. I hope that this proves true for you, dear poet. A very simple verse, but all the better because of it!
Good luck, and God bless,
Zach -
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thank you very much Zach!
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a wonderful take on the prompt! soft and sweet
I like how the words just moved right along..I greatly enjoyed reading this.. Best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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Great job here my friend!
Looking positively toward the future is
always a great think to do. Good luck!
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Are you done yet? lmao
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I just finished! hahaha
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