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Hope

art or photography Pictures, Images and Photos

 

catching glimpses of
abstract fantasies


mind dwelling on
wishful thinking


unable to let go
of the past

 

Choosing to be a victim
of your venom tongue
despite this anguish
I learn humility
 

standing strong

though I'm weak
your heart goes

into shock
you become

like me 

 

LMAO!!! Pictures, Images and Photos

 

Together we stand -

completed.

 

Author notes

I used all prompts -
Option1.
Romance is never born OF love,
instead it is born of a heart
broken BY love.
~Jetleena Torres
Option2.
never trust something that bleeds constantly for 7 days and doesnt die!
~ Lorcan Furey
Picture credit photobucket

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  • SouthpawGA
    January 27
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    Oh, I like this one.......no wonder you won some hardware....this is a nice write.


  • Denerica
    January 4
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    Special words and imagery...deserving of the Gold. Blessings.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    January 3

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    Congratulations on the gold, very deserving. I love this write.

    ♥
    whisper


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    January 2

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    This is gorgeous.
    Your words pen a story of how we can hold on to something, and dream.


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    January 2

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    I can clearly see why this was gold sweetheart, you captured something special, combining all the factors of this contest is no easy feat but you did it perfectly. Best to you and congratulations on your gold


  • maralisa silver member
    January 2
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    a brilliant take on the promt congratulations on your shinymaralisa


  • suseann
    January 2

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    Love it! Your exemplary writing,that funny sign. And "never trust something that bleeds constantly for 7 days and doesnt die!"
    ~ Lorcan Furey
    If that isn't profoundly true,I'll eat my hat!
    Well worthy of top of the heap acknowledgement.

  • mountain-woman
    January 2

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    Wow

    This is defintely a Gold. I like what you said here in so little words. Congradulations, Michele


  • Angelflower
    January 2

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    wow. this was really great.. you did such a wonderful job! I'm really amazed by the way this flowed and how well it went with all the prompts!! bravo!! I loved it! thanks much for sharing! best of luck in the contest!

    Angel


  • ZachP gold member
    January 2

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    Wow -- gerat job on working in all of those prompts.

    I admit that I'm not fond of the word "Hope" -- it's become some kind of magic word here in the US of A; something that will make everything better.

    And now that you know my political affiliation, LOL.

    This poem is amazing, and I just love what you've done here. The end is my favorite part, personally.

    Good luck in the contest.
    Zach


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    January 2

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    Very creative and well thought out!
    I tried four times to use all of the prompts
    and failed miserably! lol Well done and
    good luck to you with this one!




    Jeremy0826

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