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Re: In Remembrance by Poet Muse

 

Roses are red,
  until the day of their blossom is drawn.

Yet their buds find new grounds,
  look in your grand children's eyes, your Mother lives on!

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    January 2

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    thank you for your thoughtful comments...