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Swirls & Ties


Faith and trust
two worthy pieces
and yet so hard to find.

Only once the heart dominates
does a soul seem so unattainable.

My emotions play games
while my head is mystified.

I am lost with you,
who are you?



Author notes

30-40 words

Quote: Kiss me and you'll see stars. Love me and I'll give them to you.

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  • great take on the prompt
    very well penned


  • maralisa silver member
    January 2
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    a wonderful take on the promt maralisa


  • Angelflower
    January 2

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    a beautiful write. one that truly brings emotions from the heart.. great take on the prompt. Thanks much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.

    Angel

  • great write.

  • this is really great, very powerful. good luck my dear.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    January 2

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    Interesting take on the prompt!
    Beautiful work here and I hope
    that you do well with this one.
    Good luck to you and thanks for
    sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826


  • Kari gold member
    January 2

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    Love is such a worldwind of emotions and feelings that's for sure. I can relate very well to the ending of this poem.
    Best of luck in the contest

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