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Kissing in the Moonlight

Kiss me in the moonlight
underneath the stars
Cause baby it only
takes one kiss
To capture all
of my heart

And with one
kiss, Comes
our true love
which we cherish
Forever

Author notes

ok. lets hope this fills fast. lol
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33 Words

9 poets.
30-40 words.

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  • trekkergirl
    February 11

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    nicely written. I see you were limited to only 30-40 words. This is so hard for me. I always go over the line limit. Just wordy I guess. YOu did well. Great job. Thanks for sharing this.


  • Blondie19
    February 1
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    wow that was really good


  • DolceVito gold member
    January 2
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    How lovely

    beautifully expressed write...Congrats on the bronze.


  • maralisa silver member
    January 2
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    a wonderful take on the promt congratulations on your shiny maralisa


  • Angelflower
    January 2

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    This was really beautiful.. you really did a wonderful job with this write.. Thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • Ademon
    January 2
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    beautifully written my friend! best wishes in the contest.


  • Kari gold member
    January 2

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    Aw, this is a really sweet take on the prompt. Love is something we all hope that it really lasts.
    Good job and best of luck.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    January 2

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    Simply beautiful and a great thought
    for this prompt! Well done and good luck
    to you with this one!




    Jeremy0826

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