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There is nothing incidental
about the picture you sent me:

glass-glazed frost,
melted on your bathroom window
by early morning sun
to reveal a snow-covered
grid.

No. Nothing insignificant
about the minor detail of mortality
sticking to the wet.

Instead:
a very crucial reminder
that on this first day of a new year,
Sun cleared the view

on a frozen world
and horizon turned
fairy land ...

and Heaven.



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Photo: Devon Murray -- Sunrise on Snow -- 2009.01.01

Thank you Devon, for this beautiful gift. A wondrous wish for a New Year of New Perspectives and Life to you.

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  • CaliOkie silver member
    January 25, 2009

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    Excellent is right! This is a beautiful gift as well. So full of hope and a refreshed view of life. The solstice is past and we are vaguely aware of the lengthening day . . . Spring is on it's way. Our internal clocks are ticking down the minutes and there is a new hope in our eyes.

    Thank you!

    Garrison


  • smonte19124 gold member
    January 15, 2009

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    Excellent!

    The promise of a new beginning is crystal clear in the beauty of your words. A belated "Happy New Year" to you and congratulation on the Gold. God Bless, Jo-Ann


    • myrataal gold member
      January 15, 2009
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      Thank you so much, Jo-Ann ...

      for the blessings in comment. God bless, my friend.


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 14, 2009
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    stunning

    well deserving the gold

    • myrataal gold member
      January 14, 2009
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      Thank you so much ...

      for always encouraging me. It does not pass unnoticed.


  • azure85 gold member
    January 5, 2009

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    Such a beautiful poem, that peers inside the lines of life and sees the true meaning of the spirit. A lovely photo to accompany your gem, thank you so much.


    • myrataal gold member
      January 14, 2009
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      Thank you so much for the Gold ...

      in this very important contest for me. This entry was not incidental ... and Devon is very much part of the inspiration.

      All the best to you!
      Love
      Myra


  • Ariosto II. gold member
    January 2, 2009
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    A lovely message to start the new year with Myra.
    Your words as always, sing to me.

    • myrataal gold member
      January 2, 2009
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      Thank you, David ...

      for a lovely comment. May your 2009 be a symphony of colors.

  • Pisces rainbow
    January 2, 2009

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    always so much dept and insight woven into your writes

    awakening from stillness to life

    neverending and always the newness of every precious moment

    we are so blessed.

    profoundly written Poetess

    my pleasure to read

    God bless you...


    • myrataal gold member
      January 2, 2009
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      Thank you, PR ...

      for a gentle comment of beauty and blessings ... May 2007 bring you Life in abundance. Love to you.


  • DevonJM
    January 2, 2009

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    Ahhh

    I am very happy you like the photo, as well I believe the honesty of your words here. The truth of a small moment bringing clarity with renewal and release from frozen moments in our lives, is indeed nothing incidental or insignificant. Its the promise given to us all, in different moments, no matter how small.

    All my love to you and yours on the dawn of our new year.
    Devon

    • myrataal gold member
      January 2, 2009
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      Your honest perspectives ...

      give me guidance in dark places. Love you, Devon, very much.


  • FransB gold member
    January 2, 2009

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    This

    is such a beautiful write. The 'old' and the 'new', the 'passing' and the 'taking up' - but throughout the 'past' and 'future', there is 're-thought' - a blessing to 'turn around' and linger with soft tread into Life.

    There is so much warmth in this write, a blessing to take with you into the year that is ahead of each of us.

    Blessings to you my friend. I shall remember the both the 'glass-glazed frost' and the ... 'Sun cleared view', as on-going fulfilled promise.

    Frans


    • myrataal gold member
      January 2, 2009
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      Precious Friend ...

      you that know me in the past and the future of the NOW ... Thank you for always reading my work with that inner Eye ... and with the whispered Spirit in every word you write.

      Love to you.


  • stompsalot
    January 2, 2009

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    Gorgeous words to accent a gorgeous picture! It is amazing what we see when we look with His eyes! An absolute delight! Talented and gifted my Dearest friend Myra!
    Many blessings for the New Year!
    m.


    • myrataal gold member
      January 2, 2009
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      Thank you, Love ...

      It is the picture of Devon that carries the message so clearly and profoundly. He is clairvoyant and I love his sensitive soul -- something you will understand so well, compassionate One! Many blessings to you to, my friend.

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