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move me

you move me
you hold me
you saved me

now i can see the truth
you let my hart lose for you
i started anew just for you
you make me feel very hullabaloo
you are my angle long-overdue

you saved my from hell
you propel my soul to leveling heights
you make me see the bright lights of heaven
you are my lucky seven

my hope, my will, my love and skill
my happiness, my chill pill, my thrill

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  • ApathysEnemy
    January 4
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    here are some clappys cause this poem is better


  • depressed20emo
    January 4
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    interesting

    its about sara, thats a duh. it sounds sad though, and im sure your happy with sara.

  • ApathysEnemy
    January 3

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    hmm... i wish i had something this powerful 2 say back 2 u... but other than the spelling mistakes... it's awesome... and ur amazing

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