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17 words: travertine memories

edges
hallow
brazen
chalice
undone
default
outward
splinters
justified
ventricle
remission
tarnished
scattered
inhibitions
galvanized
limitations
benediction


Author notes

17 words

not my typical write, but do you like it?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • AniLee
    January 3

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    I really do.... This is
    a) an interesting prelude
    good choice of words

    ah.... that sounds so... not how I wanted it to Dx

    oh well, consider yourself complimented