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Mr.2009

I love seeing how the years go by,
it reminds me about how sooner or later I'll probably die,

I'm not scared of death,
I'm scared of not living with true breath.

Breath is air,
And air is life, and for me life,
is without strife.

In two thousand nine,
I wish to make all my poems rhyme.

Another crazy resolution I wish to say, today,
Is; All my debts, I will repay.

My life is full of numberless joys,
so sweet and lovely, full of pleasant noise.

I wish to smile, at least every once in a while.

So Mr. Two Thousand Oh Nine,
This year will surely be BENIGN!

Author notes

2008 was a fairly nice year for me, and I enjoyed meeting new friends, and talking to my old ones.

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  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    January 4
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    This was a great write! I loved it! Thank you for sharing & entering. ~~Iridessa~~


  • Autumn Ginger
    January 2

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    very happy and excited. i love the way you described what you wanted in the new year and what you enjoyed in the past year. very good